A strange short fiction written in 1952 when Plath was a student at Smith College. I read this in the Faber Stories edition, which was the first publication of the story in its original form. Plath steps outside the ordinary world in this story with Mary Ventura – who in her red coat is bundled unwillingly onto a train by her apparently loving parents for a journey to the far away and mysterious ‘ninth kingdom’. “You know how trains are” says her father. “They don’t wait.” The station clock “clipped off another minute”.
Plath gives details of the train interior, with reference to “red plush seats, the color of wine” and “the seams of the car, rivetted with bright brass nails”. Mary sits by the window, behind a pair of argumentative boys, whose mother is engrossed in a magazine, ignoring them. Mary is joined by an older woman out of breath from rushing to make the train. It seems fortuitous that there was a spare seat next to Mary’s. The train departs in clouds of smoke and cinders. The woman takes out her knitting. Mary admires the “leaf-green” wool. It turns out that the woman is knitting a dress “For a girl just about your size…”
Plath described the story as ‘a vague symbolic tale’. We can identify many ‘symbolic elements’ and make our own sense of it. The tone of the story, the sounds and rhythm of the text is compelling. We hear the train moving as machine and metaphor for something implacable. Unease and apprehension rise. The irrevocable passing of stops. Long, dark tunnels. Children crying, a mother with a baby in a soiled blanket. Men complaining about a crying baby. But the train will not stop until it arrives in the ninth kingdom. Outside, the terrain is gloomy and smoky. “It’s the forest fires” the woman explains. The scenery becomes post-apocalyptic in appearance. There is a scarecrow “crossed staves propped aslant and the corn husks rotting under it.” “Night comes on quickly.”
It seems that the strange has made this journey often, although no one else takes this journey more than once. There is no return. Mary asks questions about the journey and the ninth kingdom. “The last station, …Are you sure?” the woman asks.
Mary protests “It’s not my fault I took this train. It was my parents. They wanted me to go.” But the woman chides her for her lack of rebellion. Mary decides to pull the emergency cord. There are various ways we might interpret the story, which ends mystically. The publisher describes it as “a strange dark tale of independence over infanticide”.
First published by Faber Stories, 2019