Munro, who recently died, is rightly singled out as an expert in telling short stories that capture the passing of time in all its guises – present, past and future. In ‘Postcard’, she uses present tense, flashback and foreshadowing. The specificity around time is set from the opening so we know where we are, the character voice of Helen and the first mention of Clare.
“Yesterday afternoon, yesterday, I was going along the street to the Post Office, thinking how sick I was of snow, sore throats, the whole dragged-out tail end of winter, and I wished I could pack off to Florida, like Clare.”
Munro introduces us further to Clare using a delightful conversation between Clare and Helen’s mother – so much efficient character building through dialogue. ‘Postcard’ is not just about a romantic break up and the way Clare breaks up with Helen. There’s also the relationship between Helen and her mother and the damage of cruel social judgement particularly towards women by women: “But once a man loses his respect for a girl, he is apt to get tired of her.”
Here’s a sharp description of Clare: “He was a fat, comfortable, sleepy-faced man.” We know what we should think of Clare.
Such a beautiful and harsh delving into loss and heartbreak where there is little comfort extended, except by Alma who doesn’t want Helen to eat lunch on her own.
First published in Dance of the Happy Shades, Ryerson Press, 1968, and collected in Selected Stories, McClelland and Stewart, 1996/ Vintage, 1997